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All Comments on 'She's Got the Look'

by Jaded Muse

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
WOW

IT WAS GREAT. Even though it was really short, I really enjoyed it specially since I love vampire stories.

Kirk482002Kirk482002about 19 years ago
This could be a great beginning...

I'm not sure if you're just flexing your writing talents or not. This one could have continued to show just how she snares her men. If you were looking to get peoples attention as a writer, you got mine...

Kirk

DumpingtonDumpingtonover 18 years ago
Excellent writing style!

Short story, but very well written, with a nice erotic touch!

Anonymous
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