All Comments on 'She's Insatiable!'

The composition is good, the dialogue sounds like it should when two egomaniacs bond over narcissistic, nihilistic behavior; sequencing of the plot development proceeds in a logical fashion, and...with the personalities firmly established, the sadistic plan for torturing the husband is also logically the next step in the two MCs' amoral lives.

Checked "Like It" but really didn't. Kept expecting that the sexual intimacy would turn their lives into something more--make them into real people, actually become erotic rather than rote sex. But the writer's intent (as stated from the beginning) focused on the depth of their self-absorption, and giving credit where it is due, fully accomplished that goal.

Kudos on your writing skill. But your plot sucks. You have the ability--please write something with more substance.

MLJ