All Comments on 'She's my Wife, but his Slave Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great read thank you, can't wait for the next part 👍

WoodsLord_3540WoodsLord_3540almost 7 years ago
Nice...

Very well done, you stayed away from all the trite multi-guy descriptions.

Continue on.

litfan10litfan10almost 7 years ago
Lots of fun

I enjoyed this tremendously. You hit on some of my fetishes perfectly. I like how you kept giving signals of how much the wife was enjoying this.

Definitely a lot of fun.

Very nice first story - welcome to the craft.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice job

All in all a well-written story. But I was bothered by the continuous use of "my wife" and it ended up really killing the mood. Switch it up with "she", "my slut"or simply her name and it won't be as repetitive. Otherwise you did a really good job.

fran969fran969about 3 years ago

I'm mentally, physicaly and exhausted as much as your wife. and I just read the story....??

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

What a good slut wife.

This story needs to continue so Rick can use his slave to entertain and service his friends again and again

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Want to read more about your slut getting fucked by Rick and others

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