by buttman3000
Very well done, you stayed away from all the trite multi-guy descriptions.
Continue on.
I enjoyed this tremendously. You hit on some of my fetishes perfectly. I like how you kept giving signals of how much the wife was enjoying this.
Definitely a lot of fun.
Very nice first story - welcome to the craft.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
All in all a well-written story. But I was bothered by the continuous use of "my wife" and it ended up really killing the mood. Switch it up with "she", "my slut"or simply her name and it won't be as repetitive. Otherwise you did a really good job.
I'm mentally, physicaly and exhausted as much as your wife. and I just read the story....??
What a good slut wife.
This story needs to continue so Rick can use his slave to entertain and service his friends again and again