All Comments on 'She's the Boss: Working Late'

by SonofGondor

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SonofGondorSonofGondorover 8 years agoAuthor
Hello out there

Over 8000 views in less than three days, but still no comments?

Thanks to the people who've voted and loved this story so far. Feedback is always welcome, so please feel free to leave your thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Romance?

Erotic couplings more likely?

In romance I'd expect at least some indication of why people feel for each other...

SonofGondorSonofGondorover 8 years agoAuthor
Romance

This is part of an ongoing series about me and my girlfriend.

That's why I'm classing it as a 'romance' rather than 'erotic couplings.'

I take your point, but this story is meant to be read in the context of the series as a whole.

mrskelleymrskelleyover 8 years ago
Nice!!!

Great writing!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great story telling

This is a glorious romance story, full of passion and tenderness. The introductory material in this chapter is rather minimal, so to appreciate the characters and their feelings for each other, the previous submission by the author, "An Office Romance" should be read first. In the overall context, the placing of the story in the Romance genre is fully justified.

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