All Comments on 'Shhh...'

by vampwrrr

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Well written

Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice

I like the story but just wanted to let you know it was repeated after pg 2. Looking forwrd for the next chapter

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 11 years ago
Nice

this was really good, was kind of hard to understand the vamp part of it but still wow.

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 11 years ago
grrr

my bad i'm clearly way too tired to be leaving comments, loved this story

vampwrrrvampwrrrabout 11 years agoAuthor
*sheepish*

I apologize profusely and wholeheartedly to anyone who was confused by the repetition. I hit "Submit" too soon. I just submitted the actual, edited version. :/ I guess that it should be up by...the 28th or the 29.

Mea culpa. *sad face*

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyabout 11 years ago
Maybe it's just me

But this story (although very well written by the way) seemed more like an epilogue to a much bigger story than simply a standalone. That being said, and to reiterate; it was very well written and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future!

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