All Comments on 'Shhhh! There Is More After All'

would have been nice to be "a fly on the wall" when it was happening.

I really like this story. Mother and son making their fantasies come true. I hope the father really is okay with this.

Thank you for sharing.

Page one in italics is a turn off. I can't believe you didn't catch this.

I know, i know... quit knit picking.

Bleh!

i enjoyed it , hope things do turn out good for all

I enjoyed the story, you told it well. (You do, however, need an editor for the punctuation and spelling because those items kept getting in the way of your otherwise well told narrative.)

And it's so loving and beautiful when a mother opens her cunt wide for her darling baby boy's big stiff cock. That's the way it should be between a mom and her boy. A mother's hairy mommy-hole is the natural home of her boy's prick, his mother's cunt is the receptacle nature provides for all the creamy sperm in her son's young balls. Up his mother's twat is where a boy's sperm belongs.

After the first four chapters, this was a let down and in the wrong serial position.

Yup, this story felt out of sequence.