by sweeter_sensations
This is a good story, Can't wait to see where it goes, although it'd be nice if they were a little longer.
I'm still enjoying your story. It will be interesting to follow Sam and Jake, I have a feeling that Sam's pursuer is not far behind.
i think you have a good story forming here. you are taking the time to develop your characters and their stories. keep up the good work, i'll be looking for more chapters...
into your story. I am liking it more and more. Maybe longer chapters?;-) Really good, keep going please:-)
I like the characters but I'm not sure Sam should trust Jake just yet. I'm looking forward to more. If the next chapter was a little longer, that would be great!