Shifting Hearts Ch. 02

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The moment he grabbed the man around his neck, and flung him off the screaming began.

"AAAAAHHHHHH OOOOOOOHHHHHHH My Mr. Russoe what the fuck are you doing?"

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
spelling

Did you go to school . If you did you seemed to have missed english classes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good story line,,BUT

you need an EDITOR,BADLY.Is english not you first language?I like the story,but makes it a bit hard to read thru all the errors...keep writing,,,but please,get some help..

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
Your style is very erratic

It is making it hard to read sadly

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Painful reading!!

I'm really enjoying the plot so far, but I think you need to proof read before you post. This kinda painful to read with the bad grammar. Sorry if this is harsh

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Please proofread, spell check and edit...but love the story, I dig Roger

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