All Comments on 'Shiny and Shayla in Love'

this was a good story to start, but when it came to the bondage part I lost interest in it, if you do another chapter, do not make it this long and keep out the bondage

Never in my life have I read such "loving" torture. 50 Shades of Grey is virginal white compared to this. I guess it takes all kinds to be able to live/love like this, but it's not for me. And that's why it's fictional and erotica cause if the mind can conceive it, then someone will allow their body to achieve orgasmic bliss from it. Warning: this is extreme bdsm. I don't care how many times your wife asks you to re-marry.

I love all the love and the Elf... mmmm

Fuck that got me soooo HOT. I would love to read more of every thing. Post more please. Althow I would like to read more on what happens at all those weddings. Maybe thay can have a privet bdsm wedding those are FUN. Hope to read more from this story.

lots of ORGASM'S

MAX