All Comments on 'Shipwrecked'

im honestly kinda disappointed... on one hand it could be sexy, but on the other, the loss of the ability to become a mother and at such a young age, well for me thats a kill-joy...

I find pregnancy erotic in and of itself as well as an huge joyous time with the knowledge of propagating your own genes

and TBQH, like all siren story's (mainstream) including this one, they seem to wreck others just for a fuck...

not sayin im not gonna read the next chapter, just that its not my bag of tea

Anon4Evar

Very well written and I'm keen for the next part of the story which I hope will involve a lot of rough sex

The Greek story is well known But the life on the island of the Sirens was (and is) in any lit course not covered. So many possibilities....

might be a good idea instead to have the princess alter the course of how the sirens now live, making them realise that sinking the ships is wrong while they wtill have men on the island to fuck, could introduce other fetish's such as BDSM or a twist could be that the men kidnap a siren gag her so she cant whistle her sisters and then they use her?? like it a lot keep going

I LIKED IT, BUT AS MICHAEL JACKSON'S BEST SONG SAID SO CLEARLY, "

GONE TOO SOON." I'M SORRY YOU LEFT US...I THOUGHT YOUR STORY HAD REAL POTENTIAL. Cinco Estrellas!