All Comments on 'Shipwrecked, Survivor, Slave Ch. 01'

i found it to be a bit long drawn out and mildly interesting, but hope future chapters have some action in them.

too soon to tell, but gyrl knows this author and he never disappoints!

A very slow start, but we were told that the author wanted to give us good characterization. The main girl has definately been well established, now only time and future chapters will tell if this is going to be a good series to read or not.

This starts things off slowly, and like professionally written fiction it kept me just interested enough to stay with it. It was worth it.

Thanks

nice opepener jsut intesting enough ot make e what ot read more withot bing over the top.

right on target.