All Comments on 'Shit happens Ch. 01'

They are correct your spelling needs correcting if a proof reader ever read this there would need alot of work that needs correcting.

also Sara Lee is definelity will be stepping outside of her marriage like adultry so even if doug and the wife do stay together and she is caught fucking harry the boss doug can can her butt out of the house on adultry and the daughter can be canned to for colloberating with the mom in stepping outside of her marriage.

Atlanta,Ga

Given the number of spelling errors, wrong words used and other assorted ravages of the English language the 75 rating is fairly generous. But I liked the plot and the descriptions of sexual activity and had some sympathy for the main character so a 75 seemed appropriate. if the author will use an editor the next chapter will be an even better offering.