All Comments on 'Shock of a Lifetime'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
story sucks

hey asshole lesbians story are stupid no body give a shit about faggot girls your story sucks that's why women are the stuppest whores in the world the only shit they good at is cheating on there men and going lesbian thinking a fake dick will take there pussy virgins cherry those whores are just stupid the onlyt shit they good at is calling the cops on you and cheating and stop having sex with man once they have kids

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wrong area

belongs in the lesbian area also if she was so shocked why would she stay she would ahve dropped the jacket and run put your stories in the proper area and make them realistic and believable

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
underage character

sorry but after reading that your character was under 18 even though its by a day she is still underage i couldnt read anymore ... i glanced through really quickly to make sure nothing happenned untill the day after, unfortunatly it didnt.

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