All Comments on 'Sholan Alliance - AU Bk. 03 Ch. 07'

Allready looking forward to your next chapter and i enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work!

I have submitted two chapters for this series, two for SM, and three for WOR.

I have been reading or rather skimming this story as many of the subplots such as the ship recovery or Crystal are of lesser interest or confusing. The story is compelling but not well enough thought out, and has too many subplots for you or the reader to keep track of. Also, I have little patience for the misuse of "patients", and people and I assume kitties wear clothes not cloths. Yes, these words and others such as to, two, and too pass spell checks, but are irritating when misused. I suggest that you search your documents for such words to make sure you are using the correct ones; it's easy enough to do in whatever program you are using.

I do have a spelling issue which I am working on. Some words I just have an issue with and I am doing my best. On the site in my bio there are a number of edited chapters. As far as the subplots I am sorry if you don't find them interesting but they are part of the story.