All Comments on 'Sholan Alliance Ch. 02'

Please let the story run and keep us all entertained. There are a couple of times that I have seen 'for' instead of 'four' or a gender reference that gave me pause... his vs her or similar. I sure hope that I made the correct mental adjustment in those cases... thanks again.

Bumped up to a 5, as the concepts and characters outweigh the foibles of grammar though there are a few confusing moments with regards to who is addressing who.

Timing remains an issue, statements and replies do not line up all that well on several occasions.

Yilly and Tasha are fun to read about and the cast of characters seems to be well developed. I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Jason

If caffeine puts her to sleep, how would she react to catnip? Since caffeine will put a dog or cat from this planet to sleep permanently, her reaction to it does make sense, so maybe she would react to catnip the same way our kitties would...that might be fun.