by John_the_Author
Excellent story which gave me goosebumps as I read it, as a student of Military history I found the story moving and beautifully written, it would be nice to think that those who lost their lives in the wars found their true loves again like this.
And I loved it!
But, as an ex soldier, I know that war is hell!
Roger
I agree with the previous comment that this is sweet and that's a rare thing - something I had in my writing and am trying to recapture! Such a clever idea. Well done!
Aside from a few editor catch-able errors this was extremely well conceived and delivered.<P>
Some very nice work Author. Please continue to work in arena's where the majority of readers can appreciate you and your talent.<P>
With Very High Regard
Lovely story, and nice to think of "deserved reincarnation" for those who give their lives in war.
Aside from that, I found the gender switch to be a brilliant plot thickener. Well done, Author!
Congratulations on a most excellent story. Good characterization, great accuracy on the military background description of the planes and models, an exceptionally unique story and original plot. What's not to like? Kudos to you, and keep up the good work. Bombs Away!
I loved this story. Romantic, poignant, and well done. 5 stars!!
Have a very strong feeling this is a true story altered here and there and hidden as fiction.