by maadmaax
I am so accustomed to your writing erotic/porn stuff, this is a delightful change. As a shooter I'm impressed that you covered range safety so well. The drama of the competition was exquisite. Is this a one time thing or are you going to do more with it?
If you don't remember you edited my story and now I see why you're an editor. I hope I can someday learn to write like this. Not exactly an erotic story, but so well written.
I'm a shooter and, although I've never done a combat course this whole thing is so fascinating. You've obviously shot in your life. The range safety and the procedures were spot on.
I’ve taught dozens of people to shoot and I’d rather have a woman any time. They do what you tell them without any macho crap and handle pressure much better than men.
I have a student now who consistently kicks her husband’s ass in Steel Challenge matches. He refuses to take lessons and it costs him.
I’ll try to keep her away from pizza boys and pregnant women.