All Comments on 'Shooting Matt Ch. 27'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Too many characters

Love the story but way too many characters and storylines DC3A

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
i love ALL the characters and story lines...

Keep up the great writing... I look forward to each chapter.

Pay no attention to small minds unable to grasp the bigger picture.

Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

sm1982sm1982over 6 years ago
Wasn't expecting Darien to appear so soon..

Unlike the Anon, there aren't that many characters to keep up with nor too many storylines. You have done a great job in separating the stories and relationships. Your main characters are still present and the most important plots. I especially love reading about the progression in Liam and Matt'a relarionship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Spider

Awwww! The spider lie was cute. Love the balance between story and sex scenes.

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