All Comments on 'Shooting My Sister Ch. 01'

WOW! Excellent story. Looking forward to the second chapter. Hopefully it doesnt take to long.

This is one hot story! I like the plot of taking advantage of the sister by faking a interview, nice twist. Very well written and the story flows along very well. Hope to read another chapter soon. Keep up the great work!

Great start...... delightful takeover of the momentum by the unsuspecting Jenny...sure hope Steve continues the casting help and gets to enjoy full vaginal and anal.... maybe Jenny will submit to a spanking as well?? lOL You have offered so many possibilities!! Thanks

I enjoy your story. Very hot and wicked. I wonder how long they can play her and what they can make her do.

he knows the truth of their connection and can use that to get with Jenny or something else. Friend or no, this situation is unstable.

I love it.

so crazy it was almost believable. i think if you do chapter 2, you should turn everything upside down. like it turns out that his sister was actually conspiring with his friend because she had a long time crush on her brother. so in chapter 1 he thinks he's tricking her, in chapter 2 he finds out he's the victim.

I cannot wait for the next part of this.

Looking forward to ch. 2

Interesting and unique, I'll give it a 5 because I really liked it but I personally enjoy a much slower buildup. That's just my opinion though but this really was a enjoyable read regardless.