All Comments on 'Shooting Pool with the Guys'

All three should fuck and suck each other with gusto cumming in every holes and swallowing cum fro each cock and pussy asshole and mouth.

You shifted the storytellers point of view too many times and messed up the names several times. Mike at one point is doing the fucking and being fucked all at the same time. Keep the names straight next time. Not bad overall.

Since this 'story' contains gay sex, should it not be categorized differently?

sometimes its mike, and sometimes its mark