All Comments on 'Shopping For Men'

by chloedeboncourt

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NylonlovaNylonlovaabout 10 years ago
Interesting

Mmmm if only , lol , a place like this could end up costing me a fortune ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

This didn't belong in "exhibitionism" This story belonged in "Humor" or "fantasy" My only problem is how to sent this to my marketing friends.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Deal of the day

Tesco in UK has a saying "Every little helps"

I wonder if they might trial this idea with

their clubcard loyalty scheme ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Fun story

Fun story but not too far from the truth. Men will patronage businesses because of sexy women.

BurningMonkeyBurningMonkeyabout 10 years ago
I'm confused...

I agree with the comment that this doesn't belong in this category.

It is neither exhibitionist (it isn't clear that Isabelle is getting hot by showing off her body to Duncan) nor voyeurism, since Duncan actually participates in a sex act with the woman he's watching. Don't know where it should go...Erotic Couplings? Fantasy?

Otherwise a good story and a good first submission. Keep it coming--all puns intended!

Stephen7RedoStephen7Redoabout 10 years ago
Oh my my...

Left me hanging...but hanging hard...

You have one hell of a naughty imagination. So can't wait for the next installment.

Keep writing...a lot!

Stephen

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Take this further!

What a naughty piece! And really funny.

Please take this further! What if you could buy sex acts like milk and cheese? Or what if you would have special lesbian deals? Oh the opportunities!

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