All Comments on 'Shopping with a Friend'

by jacqui4u2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

I love your writing, I write also but wow. However you accidently changed the name from kim to karen one or two times near the end, but overall great story.

tigger7769tigger7769about 13 years ago
shopping with a friend

very hot great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Really? Switching the name of one of only three girls in the middle of the story (Kim / Karen)? Really?

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