All Comments on 'Short Skirt, Long Jacket'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
VERY NICE!!!

Very good read. Very appropriate for Valentines Day. Thank you. Made this ol'man remember remember better times.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Big Fan. Small criticism.

Great writing but next time, please more kinky sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
the cake

what happened to the cake? licking the batter off your girl is great and I like

whipped cream on a women too. nice tale but besides being short, tell us

about her body. cute butt, nice boobs to suck , short bush hair , do tell.

robthecradlerobthecradleabout 9 years ago
5 stars

A little more detail would've been nice; it felt rushed at the beginning. Otherwise, great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Okay, but what happened to the cake?

"Jamie smirked from between her legs and said, "'Shhh baby, just relax.'" Smirk doesn't mean what you think it means. From dictionary.com: "What does smirk mean? A smirk is a kind of smile, but it's not a friendly smile—it's often a sarcastic or arrogant one or one that's intended to provoke or irritate the person who sees it." It has a negative connotation, and it's misused a lot on this site.

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