All Comments on '"Short-Staffed? Make It Happen!"'

I want to see what happens after willow comes over and if the other members of her family becomes more sexual towards her too.

Wow, you did a masterful job of character development.

It was a good story well written.

Why you didn't start your story out letting the readers know that part of the family was hearing-inpaired? Instead you just stated that they signed.

Using cm and meters took away from the story for me, you could have said cm (inches) meters (feet)

Thank you for getting back to me about my comments, it was a great story and I am looking foreward to the next chapter.

I know that most countries use the metric system and my comments were not meant to put your story down just that it would be helpful to have both metric and inches as there is a lot of readers here in the US such as me that don't understand it.

It's too bad you can't write about the younger daughter yet she sounds like she's going to be very hot reading.

Oh, hell -- you CAN'T stop here!! This is one screamingly hot lesbian story that's just waiting to happen! Please, PLEASE reconsider your decision to make this a one-shot deal.

The words hot and lesbian are mutually exclusive. Keep that shit out of this forum ..... Futard!

You do write well.

But please can you let us have an indication right from the start that the story is lesbian inc.?

It would only take a few words.

To anonymous (who wanted me to say that the story is lesbian):

I did say so. It says right in the note at the very start of the story that this is an incestuous lesbian story. Please read the author's note if you want to know this. Also, the tags for the story mention "mother" "daughter" and "lesbian". I did my best to let everyone know the kind of story this is.

But I'll take them back if there is no sequel

the ending was disapointing and more of rowan and mom getting closer maybe turn that into another story

Great start need to tell about next weekend? Need to get dad involved full family loving.

This was fantastically written, a great start to what I hope is a series of stories about a mother/daughter relationship! Please, please continue this tale.

I love girl and girl stories especially like where they are intimately related particularly mother daughter sisters

loved this story, seriously sad to see it does not have a sequel yet.

please?

I want more, i feel i read all this for a half ended story. It was good tho. Id like a part 2 willows weekend. And it would be nice for more hot mommy daughter interactions. Maybe even a half dance with no stripping for the younger one.

It suck.

I gave it a try, but this was terrible. Bad writing, bad plot, bad characters, nothing interesting actually happened, just a waste of time overall.