All Comments on 'Short-Term in Chicago'

I love this story!!Can't wait to hear more.

Nothing about the texture of the other penis!! A great Story!! The texture is what I want to explore.. I gave 5***** stars.. Newbee!!

Really enjoyed the story, you need to finish it. :)

He's an anesthesiologist, the highest paid and most difficult to insure of all doctors on the dole, and he fucks a neighbor in 2010 (or 2011) without a condom? I'm not buying it... sorry. The story was well written, but the characterization of your seducer could use just a little work.

By the way, there are a lot of women who find themselves turned on by two men having sex. That might be a direction to explore.

I was a little bit startled during the sex when John failed to use a condom. This doesn't seem like a mistake someone in the medical profession would make...

...and while the story was fairly well written, I found the difference in the patterns of speech between John and Glenn to be unintelligible. I mean, Glenn if from California and John is from Chicago, right? Again, well written but I think the characters could do with a bit of fleshing out...

Halsted Street, not Halstead.

I really enjoyed the story....but in response to all of the comments posted about some1 in the medical field not using condoms is preposterous. Speaking from personal experience, I have had sexual liasons with 2 doctors who both took me bareback....

I say this to defend the storyline as being very realistic to real life.

Keep up the excellent writing....although I would enjoy a story line where the trysts between 2 bi-curious guys remained a secret..versus the characters telling their wives.

I found this story to be particularly well written. Nice job. I certainly can't wait to read more. Definitely a turn on for me =3

Made my cock ache.......and me curious, along with giving me a lot of precum to lick up

YES! Let the story continue. Ignore any negativity - I know from experience when you've never had it and want it as bad as glen did and you're with someone you really trust, you go for it- all the way and experience it whole hog. You wrote an incredibly engaging story that drew me right into the heat of the moment. Yes I even had to take a short break and clean up before finishing reading the story. Please keep writing - I'd love to see these two enjoy each other's company much more and the surfer ride the wave.

WoW I do hope the continuation cums soon because this is one hot story, well written and well conceived in my opinion. Thank You :)

Excellent story; well-plotted, good grammar, spelling, punctuation; none of the usual impediments to the flow of the narrative. Quite believable, not so 'over-the-top' as are so many other tales. A little weird to read, for me, as the straight guy is very much where I am, mentally; reads like an echo of so many of my own fantasies. Please continue the tale!

Wow, just wow!

great work this was truly a fine story to read look forward to more of ur writings

i look forward to this next installment..this was exciting and horny...loved it well written...well done.....jonathan...lancashire...england....

Don't agree with the naysayers except that not all medical people follow what's safe- look at smoking, for example. Glenn and John are hot.

hot is a understatement

I love to read hot sex, this was supernova HOT!!!

I write a lot of stories for another site...and this had me hard the entire time...

great job?!

I AM EXPERIENCING GAY SEX FOR THE FIRST TIME I WILL MEET A MAN IN AN HOUR. AFTER READING THIS STORY NOW I AM GAY THANKS

I loved reading this and I wish I could try man to man sex sometime.

This was a very hot and intense story. Great read!

This was incredible.

That was incredible! Do damn hot!

As a former Chicagoan transplanted to New England, I am proud of John for having made Glen feel so comfortable during his short stay. Now, on to Chapter 2!

Great sexy story. I’m definitely a man who partners with women but have had some wild times with men. I am a surfer from California, 54 now, and related to glen easily. Would love to tantalize a cool man with my wife someday. We talk about it. Five stars. I have a few stories crossing the line with men coming down the pike. Cheers.

Wow. If I were Glen, I'd have succumbed to John right away. I love it when gay men get turned on by my being straight (in massages).

I bisexual and have had sex with a lot of men mainly in gay bathhouses and arcades but I’ve always wanted to be seduced like in this story by a gay man. I probably wouldn’t be as reluctant though