All Comments on '$ Shortage'

Very nice. Well done..

...And for a change there was no spanking!! :-)

Great story.

Too bad he didn't eat her asshole out and rimmed her until she came.

Well done!

Peter is a Bad Man.

My kind.

of the way of a superior man, the kind Donald Trump thought himself to be when he was talking that smack ten or so years ago. He may indeed have been that kind of man back in his heyday , but to be 60 years old ( at the time ) and exposing his id so fecklessly. Donald lost ' the way ' . Don't get me started on Hillary . No starry eyed liberal here.

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Awesome!

What a story made me laugh as it could be so posable, loved how simple it all was , well describes great sex and likeable characters .

Humor and sex! Classic combination. I read it and then quickly re-read it.

To Mr. Ashson: Please continue the storyline and, of course, the characters.

Funny. It held my attention. This is the second story of yours that I have read. The male characters in both have been bold and unapologetic; the women likeable, not sluts but not prudes either.

I liked this bit of dialogue:

"I didn't say we would do this," she gasped, watching my cock press firmly against her pussy.

"True," I assented, holding myself poised, wanting to take her no matter what she said. "Do you want me to stop or to fuck you?"

"Ah god," she groaned, as my cock started to push her lips apart. "Do it. Fuck me. Oh, god, fuck me hard, please."

This story fit well into the one page format. I liked it. Keep them coming.

Loved the girl’s reluctance and the way you overcame it in such a gentlemanly fashion and so realistically. Delicious description of having her!

I loved it! I liked how he treated her and how she reacted, no abuse what so ever, which I like and both parties enjoyed the encounter. Great writing style.

Thanks for sharing. 5 stars.

Really enjoy it. Hope there is another chapter where these two can get much better aquainted.

5 stars

I was working for a friend when his wife caught him cheating. I already knew about it. I was the recipient of her revenge fuck. He sold his business to his brother...there went my job...and he moved 250 miles away. His wife and I tried to continue our relationship, but it just didn't work for us.

Good read begging for a continuation...! Thanks for sharing your creativity and imagination among other things with us...

Another fun short read with a proper ending.

Liked it!

Bill S.

A true knight in only slightly tarnished armor!

This could be the start of something wonderful, more please! A very nice little stroke piece. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I love the light humor that runs through all your stories.