All Comments on 'Shorts'

I never thought I'd see a story like this, but this site is full of surprises. I liked it, but I think it belongs in Erotic Horror because of the soul eating.

I liked it but it was rather confusing on a few levels. this needs more development.

This along with the other stories following this main character! I have no fucking clue what's happening! And at the end of the series he turns to stone & dies? Please fucking explain to me what is happening!

Goddess, if I see the word "Jiri" again and ":" I'll go nuts. Wow written like a 12 yo.

Your sentence structure is too simple. Apostrophes were invented for a reason please use them. Every sentence doesn't have to start with Jiri if he's in it, mix it up a bit.

One a little bit paragraphs and I'm looking for the bit to put 1 star.

Anonymous comments should be banned