All Comments on 'Shouldn't'

by Acerbicscribbler

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baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Nice beginning

Will there be more ?

peachfuzz69peachfuzz69over 9 years ago
There should be more

I'm hooked. I want more

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIover 9 years ago
5

Enthralled...please don't end it here.

CaveCat12401CaveCat12401over 9 years ago
Excellent

Original.

Something special from a very talented writer.

63lsmith63lsmithover 9 years ago
VERY NICE

Yes very nice indeed, the intro. was a little long. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Shouldnt

I loved this version. Delicious flow.

Gene63Gene63over 9 years ago

Loved it!!! Please continue!!! I want more of these two.

coolhand69692coolhand69692over 9 years ago
Brilliant

Love the style, looking forward to more!

TimothyMTimothyMover 9 years ago

Resting temptation for so long made him fall even harder. But I hope it turns out to be love and not just lust. At least there are no legal or moral difficulties now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Liar

That was amzing for being "bare bone version"

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Bravo!!!

Beautifully written! Love the slow build, detail and imagery. Hope you continue to write more, so talented!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
yikes!

What a stupid teacher who could not see through the plot to get into his pant. I would have report him in the first place let him loose his scholarship..let alone let him into my house...what a brat.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Awesome

I came three times

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yaoi

In a nutshell .

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I'm a straight girl and I don't know why I kept reading but that was so well written, kudos

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Adorable

very well written, so sweet and amazing.

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

G-zus that was the very best wham bam I've read in a long, long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'd love to have a rl love story like this🥺🥺🥰

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Hi again. I remembered my passwords. I have a blog full of rough drafts and story beginnings. I've also put some ebooks together of material not on Literotica. Find me on Smashwords under Walker C. Fields.

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