All Comments on 'Show & Tell Ch. 05'

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Anonymousover 7 years ago

losing the plot a little

understand it s a true story but that chapter may have been better with a 5 and 6 to build it up again. Its been brilliant though bring on the next part

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

I agree with the previous commentator. This episode is not nearly as interesting or as exciting as the previous entrees. Only 3*** for this chapter...hope things pick up in the next chapter.

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