All Comments on 'Show & Tell Ch. 10'

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Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Now I understand...

...the connection with you, Ellie and Suzy. Thank you very much sir and I very much enjoyed it, 5* worth.

Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Dissappointed

I was more interested in the needy little school teacher and how he could have met her needs. The writing is fine, it just went a different direction then I wished.

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