by murphtsurf
You are correct. My first submission of this chapter was "Rejected," I think, because I listed specific establishments in the telling. I then eliminated those names and resubmitted the Chapter, which was again "Rejected," this time for an unspecified reason. I revised the telling once more, but during the interim, Literotica not only published the first revisal, but also the second. Thus the double telling, with the minor changes. Just a miscommunication!
As always I enjoyed your story. Sorry to hear you have been ill. Hope you are feeling better. I wonder why Elle stays w Todd at all.