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Even if her name is Emilia, her friends would for sure call her "Em."

LarryInSeatle

"Emilia?

Even if her name is Emilia, her friends would for sure call her "Em." "

That was actually my point, since the character is actually based on myself and my own experience, I just used a name similar to my own. I didn't think the story would be finished so fast, so I didn't bother really adding them addressing myself as that in there.

Similar situations occur more than most women will admit. In the right circumstances most will give it a try.

Typo at the 5th word is not a good start!

I loved this story a lot but I think it could have been longer and more detailed but that is just me! Keep up with the good work!

Drenched in a downpour, three gals decide to warm up in a hot shower together. The narrator relates that although "[b]oth .. friends knew of my same sex attractions,"only Alex hesitated to undress. Despite "some [initial] tension" once all bare under the comforting warm water, accidental touching led to led to more serious activity. A well told story of young adult exploration of sexual expression.

Fantastic story well written and very exciting as it developed. I hope there will be another chapter one day.

Fantastic story well written and very exciting as it developed. I hope there will be another chapter one day.