All Comments on 'Shower Power'

I loved your story and hope you write more.

(Without a sound I moved forwards and put my hand between the mans legs, running a finger over his hole. My cock flushed anew at the feeling of slight stubble around his hole. Startled, he spun around and I grabbed my chance. I pressed my lips to his and pulled our bodies together. His hardness rubbed against mine and it drove me wild with pleasure. He tried to pull away but I wouldn't let him. I slid the tip of my index finger into his hole as we kissed )

'he tried to pull away but i wouldn't let him'_____sounds like RAPE

some guy who'd rather stay home and watch porno instead of going out with his friends. likes to regularly spy on guys in the bathroom. then just stripped and walked into this guy's shower and forced himself upon him__you described the victim as dark and tall and very muscular- i was hoping that the victim was going to beat the shit out of this presumptious ass- cause this fuck deserved to be beaten and left for dead and pissed and shit on for what he did. and just because you had your shower guy welcome it does not make this dick's actions any less criminal or sick-plus he tried to pull away and your rapist wouldn't let him_ it also seemed unlikely that the muscle guy would let this peeping tom stick his tiny little dick in his muscular ass....people who write stories about guys forcing themselves on other guys- and then making it okay to do it is kinda disgusting_ it makes you wonder what the author would do if given the chance- or not given the chance but would take the liberty anyways

take these stories a little to heart.? dont they know its fantasy.? get a life fool.

@dinkyboots

Except, they're right sooooo. The story didn't need that all