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by stewman121056

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Not bad

It's not bad there's a bit of inconsistancy in it. You have the speaker observing what is going on between Michele and Billy in the shower yet you also have the speaker and Sue coming home just as Billy and Michele are fucking on the bed. Which is it?

don87654don87654almost 19 years ago
Needs a few more chapters

Inconsistent. But then this is a fantasy, right?

fishgetterfishgetterover 1 year ago

Why did the author make this story up, just to fuck it up with the changes in POV???

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