All Comments on 'Showing Off For The Rep'

by Daver630

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hedomanhedomanabout 20 years ago
This is a compromise vote.

This is a compromise vote. I would give it a 100 simply because I love stories of women daring to show off their bodies. Unfortunately it was spoiled by what I consider very poor writing. There was no dialogue, no really good descriptions, no insight on the characters, etc. etc. etc.

100 for the subject matter (My kink)

25-50 for style and writing ability 100+50=150

1/2 of 150=75

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