All Comments on 'Shredding Underwear in the Shower'

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mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 10 years ago
This is a very sexy story

But it makes me shudder to think of the cost of all this activity! Never mind - it's fiction (is it) so that doesn't really come into the equation. I hope you have lots more fun with these characters! Five stars - thank you.

trite_readertrite_readeralmost 10 years ago
It's A Slippery Slope...

That needs to be slid. A precipice violated.

I also love the idea where she may be or feel as though she's in control, but it is tenuous at best. They are loving siblings after all.

Too juicy. Can't wait to read what happens.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
very different

Whilst enjoying the story in the beginning because it was very different in the interactions between the siblings that we are all used to, i feel it's getting very predictable. Him comming loads and them eating it and cutting up underwear just in different places. It is well written though

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