All Comments on 'Shunted'

More please...

You might like my stories too. We share a minimalist style.

Nice. Pleasent introduction.I'm awaiting "chapter two"

This doesn't need anymore story. I've already finished it and it was a perfect ending.

This is just wonderful, Fishy! A very real scene that leaves a lot to the imagination. I enjoyed it!

Thank you, I really enjoyed this story. It's simple and stylish and well written. I like how we get a glimpse into John's mind and his struggles with overpowering naughty thoughts. It was sweet and it made me smile. It did not need more to it and I loved the ending. :)

I like this story!

But it has just begun. A tease.

Tease us more...much more!... and short teases are fine...to begin...mmm