All Comments on 'Shy Girl'

But I think something got lost.

Still, nice language and a hot situation.

Not bad??? This was a terrific story. You should continue the adventures of Lisa and "what's his name". Let her get even kinkier with rimming and ass to mouth and water sports. This was a great start and the story should develope further.

How did you know those things about shy girls?! So few men seem to realize that we hold so much passion, but you were able to word it perfectly. This is the first erotic short story that I have read that makes me feel as though the author is writing about me specifically. Thank you.

This is one of the best written submissions I've read. The situation is sufficiently realistic and erotic while the story flow is almost perfect. It's always nice to read an author who is competent in the use of the English language.

Enjoyed your story. Shy girls for me haven't been quite so sexual as your girl but some were real close. Nice job of capturing both shyness and the sexual feelings of a young college co-ed. Hope to hear more from u. Mntman

Loved the story, it was really fun to read. I love reading a story about a shy girl who quickly lets a guy know what she likes in bed. Liking anal was just a plus in my book.

great story - lots of shy girls nodding their heads in agreement

Not my usual category, but worth the deviation. (pun intended).

PS; We might be neighbors! (Likely not).