by Ashson
Loved the personality of the characters made for great reading. Glad that charles and the uncle got the boot. Hope that this story continues, just would like to read a finish. it was nice to see that Melissa was not the shy rabbit. Liked her fire....
This is an interesting change of pace for you. Kudos for spreading your wings a bit.
Just as others have written, I also enjoyed the break from the norm. A very good story without the usual scenarios that were becoming a bit redundant. While I enjoy all your stories, this was a most welcome addition.