All Comments on 'Shy Girl'

by Ashson

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tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
Good detailed story with a twist

Loved the personality of the characters made for great reading. Glad that charles and the uncle got the boot. Hope that this story continues, just would like to read a finish. it was nice to see that Melissa was not the shy rabbit. Liked her fire....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Not Ashson's usual fare

This is an interesting change of pace for you. Kudos for spreading your wings a bit.

dragginlizarddragginlizardabout 9 years ago

Just as others have written, I also enjoyed the break from the norm. A very good story without the usual scenarios that were becoming a bit redundant. While I enjoy all your stories, this was a most welcome addition.

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