by aurelius1982
A great story must have a great closure. This is just too good. Great work.
I think a little too much time was spent on the back story, but it was not bad. i am very much looking forward to this story getting back to the present and moving forward. Keep up the good work!
I am looking forward to the next installment of the shy indian wife
i just loved the way you developed the story with the neighbour's servant Chandan, such a turn-on even though they never actually had sex... so very well written. Maybe, at some point in the future now that she is married, she could explore by opening up with meeting Chandan again!!!! Or they employ him as their new servant as she feels responsible for making him loose his previos job!!??!! Never been so excited about a series before, look forward to your next installement... your biggest fan, lots of love Madhu XXX
my god!! my god!!! what a story...
u cant imagine..how many times i read this story of chandan and bella part...
this is the best story i have read til date..
but i was soooo dissapointed when bellas mother caught them..
please rewrite the servant chandan and bella part ..let bella lie to her husband that she lied about moher catching them....and extend it in a long story..and let sex happen very late
just dont ever make her slutty..extend in the same way of inocency ...plz write the same part again..
wgr8 work man!!!
Rarely men understand women properly, you accepted When men can freak out why not women. Your wife Bela is innocent.
Keep writing.
Pls continue this story more about chandan's advances and bela a willing partner
In that .rather than finishing it here . Such a nice story u portrayed . Amazing work , please continue this story more
Please don't end it here. Extend this story to something like Bella lied to her husband and she did loose her virginity to Chandan and then Chandan exploited here in many ways. He had her sex on the roof and share her with his many friends and so on... Please please do extend this story. This is the best story I ever read. Great work.
ahh bela ah.ben hiç böyle fırsat yakalayamadım,ah.
guys, what a story, the author is not writing much I guess. Anything similar and as good which I can read?