All Comments on 'Shy Man Finds Love'

Everything happened so fast! Good core, but turn this into a 5 or 6 page story and you've got it. Tell us more abou the characters!

You need to add more detail to the sex part! This was not even exciting, good plot idea though! I'm a nerd lover. Nerdy shy guys turn me on like CRAZZYYY!! Enough about me, check spelling mistakes and add more detail

Sexcapade blossoms into love

It's titled "Shy man finds love" but the real focus in the story is on Karen who brings on the sexual escapade. Her motive is somewhere between simply slutty to imperviousness. She picks out a brainy guy just to show she can rustle his sheets. To accomplish the act, she has to In a way her purpose in seducing a smart guy is to insult him. However what starts as a goof ends in a permanent relationship.