All Comments on 'Siblings Ch. 03: Innocence Revisited'

I am really enjoying your writing and this tale is very erotic. I would like to read of what happens next between the 3 of them.

I loved the teen years and the tender love between Tom and Lucy.

I did not like the middle years where Lucy made a bad judgment.

. Also where spent his years alone because of his love for his sister.

NOW. I loved his return to the UK and his love for Lucy. I thought the tenderness between Surprised and now Lucy.

My perfect ending will be Su, Lucy, and Tom being together until Su meets the right man and Lucy realizes her error and she and Tom move in together or at lease share the balance of their lives.

Still an EXCELLENT STORY.

Two wrongs do not make a RIGHT.

He loved his sister TOO much and she made a BIG MISTAKE.

Stay together and correct BOTH MISTAKES

Hope there’s more.

Wrote a nice comment only to have phone fuck it up.

Have Lucy and her brother marry and have a child. No one will know they are brother and sister..Have Su either marry or have a child with Uncle.

please continue

To be true or even partially so. If so you are a very lucky man and I envy you.

Meh, first 2 chapter was nice but this ruined it.

decent story til you had mom and daughter doing stuff. completely ruined didn’t even bother to finish!

Sorry but having a mother and daughter servicing me at the same time is a huge (unrealised) fantasy of mine. I purposely didn’t have them playing with each other.