All Comments on 'Sick Eyes'

Gay male would have been a better choice. Other than that, quite boring....useless one might say.

Hope you write more stories like this!

Wasnt really something, too much usefulness and shit, the ending developed way too rapidly, 4/10

Has a nice progression to it and made me feel part of the story. Fit the category well when i realized the male was not gay but warped im the head by hypno-therapy. Please continue making interesting stories

Please?

Liked the idea and enjoyed it initially. Did get a little repetitive "it's useful to.." you had set tbe hypnotic edge you don't need to keep saying it. Also you stopped before all the juicy details.

Keep writing though you'll only improve, Ill read definitely read more of your stories