All Comments on 'Sienna'

I like where you left them in the end, its another beginning. I would bet her parents aren't going to be home till afternoon. I wood keep her bare assed naked till then.

Very well done!

"Lay down on the bed and I will give your shoulders a massage." She said. I thought to myself "If I don't lay down soon she will see my bulge growing in my pants." So I laid down. "

I'm sorry but that is semi literate nonsense.

Please learn the difference between lay and lie. It isn't difficult.

"Lie down on the bed and I will give your shoulders a massage," she said. I thought to myself "If I don't lie down soon she will see my bulge growing in my pants." So I lay down." Correct.

Chill, dude. While it's true that this new author should find an editor, sass helps no one.

Keep it up, ragnarok1!

Also please remember that real people don't speak - or think -in proper grammatical English.

I love this story and would love to see another chapter or two.

There wasn't really any new ground broken here. The whole "stuck together due to a snow storm" is a bit cliché, but the story was enjoyable nonetheless.

For future reference, whenever dialogue changes from one speaker to another in a story, it starts a new paragraph. You did it right about 75% of the time, but you had a bunch of paragraphs where three or more changes in speaker were jammed together. It makes it hard to read.

Thank Heaven for Little Girls. TK U MLJ LV NV

A beautiful story of young love! It seems that boys definitely mature long after girls. Great that they actually got together and even her Mom knew about it! One great night of pleasure between tow people who have always loved one another. Please take this further!

Lots of juicy sex in this well-presented story. There is a bit of a feel of a "pervert alert",wondering whether Kurt's been wondering about fucking her since he met her when she was 10.Kind of adds to the spice of it all. Wasn't quite sure exactly how old Kurt was 'til he mentioned he was twice her age of 20 pretty near the end of the story.

Lovely short story. Fun reading it. 5*s.

5 Stars .. I really liked this Story

Great story. It deserves a sequel or 2.

too weird

Needs a continuation, that was hot.

A good old stroking storyline, not badly written