All Comments on 'Sienna's Suprise'

Good start and hope the story continues!

...With character development all along the way. It made the ending so much more erotic that way rather than just spitting it all out at the beginning. Still, I found myself wanting more of each of them and even in the first chapter it helps to give some of the reasons for her hesitancy in telling him. It seems there has to be more to it than just normal transphobe reaction fears. But it got my tear ducts a workout, and I loved both characters! 5 stars,but please... more char background next time? Thanks for a nicely written TG romance, and I'd love to hear about these two again. Cheers! --- Josie

My stories are very similiar to this but you write with more detail in the sex scene dept. I have to work on that. Nicely done.

I have to agree with Joscelyn, you build your characters very well and the end result is much more exciting. I hope to see more from these two. Interesting to see what happens with the band and how that plays out. Keep it up!

yes very good more chapters please ty

A big thanks to everyone for their feedback on this story. Your kind words and insights are appreciated. Initially, I had intended it to be a stand alone short story. However, during the writing process I became quite fond of the characters and they lead me in different directions than I had anticipated. I am working on Chapter 2 and hope to have it finished soon.

I thoroughly enjoyed the characters and hope they will continue in more chapters.

A beautiful girl with something extra, and punk rock lol. I really enjoyed this story, the writing was great, the sex scenes were awesome. I like how you described his curiosity about going down on her, but at the same time showed that he was a little unsure at first, and then as it went on he decided that he wanted to try. I really cannot wait for Chapter 2, I'm sure it will be as good as this one.

Oh come on! That was awesome! I know it's been a while but t