All Comments on 'Sierra Lives Pt. 01'

by Abashed

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notusuallyshynotusuallyshyabout 6 years ago
Short

Very well written, I like the premise, characters are already well drawn. I imagine loads of potential for intrigue and adventure and what we're mostly here for; sex.

BUT is was way too short, barely got going and it was gone

AbashedAbashedabout 6 years agoAuthor

Thanks! Yes, more to this story is already pending : )

44chicken44chickenalmost 6 years ago
Good start...

... more please!

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