All Comments on 'Sierra's Identity Change Ch. 05'

as a story as usual has become a piece of junk,i'm sure somewhere along the line he will forgive either that or become a pimp totally stupid as is the author.

Actually, it makes me want to puke. So predictable, transparent, and lame. She is distraught and remorseful and goes to an exclusive expensive beach resort? Your characters' thinking, motivations, and behaviors are stupid, thoughtless, and self-defeating. These people deserve whatever bad happens to them. So how can we feel any concern or pathos? And the blackmail setup is preposterous. So, not well conceived nor written.

You can take a few months before submitting the next chapter; no loss in momentum or interest.

Loved the story about Hosea, that was beautiful to add, and quite relevant, didnt know about that particular book of the bible.

Now does the pastor follow his own advice, or desend into hopelessness, rage and lust for revenge?

I dont see how you can possibly finish this in another two page chapter, but I am game if you are. Pls dont feel the need to finish before you complete your ideas to your satisfaction, the stories are getting good reviews - dont like the blackmail thing being effective, just seems like she coulda gone to hubby and removed all the power from the blackmailer, but oh well it's your story.

Now what separates the really good authors is your ability to finish the tale in an interesting way that is consistent with what you have already revealed. Good luck!

If this story fell any faster is would be in a complete free fall. It may even reach negative numbers.

"...the haters gonna hate, hate, hate"

Thanks to those enjoying the story. To those who are anonymous and haven't ever written a story... get a life :)

Check out my other stories under "Rhinotoons" and "Rhinoman." Two of my favorites were "Blue Balls" and "Virtual Reality."

Rhino

It's sad that husband never has the chance to confront or work things out. Typical bad decisions throw family away and bad man winning.

what else is new 1*

Each chapter is getting worse. Part of the problem is this story belongs in a different category. There is no excuse for dragging this story out, beyond 5 chapters. The story started out with an interesting premise, but went progressively downhill with each chapter. The author would be advised that instead of attacking his critics, he should concentrate more on creating an interesting story.

You know, I'm very happy there is another chapter coming. Nothing else to say. Bring it on...

Still waiting

should be available anytime. Already up on www.eroticstories.com

This is as bad as the others were good.

Thanks for the story

What a heap of shit.

Paul Gruber should be dealt with more than severely. This lady, now married, was trying to forget her past choices. To make matters worse, she married a preacher and loved him dearly. She was leaving her past life behind, turning to GOD...

Turned into an ir piece of shit. Author, you suck.