All Comments on 'Sigma Omega Sigma Ch. 07'

I read the original 3 chapters awhile ago, and really liked the premise. I thought everything was happening too fast, but sometimes a higher version of suspended disbelief is needed. However, after reading the last two entries, I feel like I have been through a mach 3 left turn, and not in a fun way.

I get the secret society angle, and the BDSM angle thrown in for flavor. I could even get behind the poly marriage thing. But when you threw in biblical sci-fi/fantasy elements, I had to stop reading for the headache that bloomed.

You have entirely too much going on with a timeframe that too fast for anyone to wrap their head around. Even Indiana Jones stories allow you to believe that everything is happening over the course of a longer time frame than 36 hours. I have the mental equivalent of whiplash going on after this entry.