All Comments on 'Sigma vs. Omega: Advance Bio'

Garbage says it all, given the frequent and near constant use of ... makes it almost impossible to read, and more like some grade school kid wrote it. Remove the trash or send it back for a full total overhaul.

Glad to see something new of yours. Your "Eric Lacroix" is about my favourite thing on this site (I wish you'd revisit him!) You do not write garbage, I have read most of Henry James, Tolstoy, Dostoevsky, Joyce, Beckett etc. etc. and come here for fun, which you provide, for free. Thank you.

Man, you are amazing. Your description of body, muscles, sex action, it's maybe best in literotica. I cant find better. And I agree with you, ripped abs and huge gravity defined tits, it's perfection of girls body. It will be cool, if your write more about transformation from looser to a hot muscular stud. Good luck.

Please continue the story!!!

I think having more start up before the crazy sex and detail would be a good step for this series. I wouldn't mind seeing what kind of sexual anarchy these two sororities could unleash. For a first run it wasn't too bad. Keep trying though. your stories are one of a kind on this site.

More of this please!