by TFMR
Thanks for posting. Never mind the wankers - full speed ahead!
The author has a gift for descriptive words & phrases, but not with a story. He presented one side of a coin very well. The phrases concerning the ' rush of the forbidden sharing ' and describing his woman's allure was sterling. The door to the taboo zone was opened and the first few steps inside - nice !
There is always an aftermath though on one level or another. When TFMR draws back the curtain on that - he'll be an author in full. *** stars and one more * added because this is a premier effort. Next time I'm hoping this writer takes it to another level.
that the real diary entries would be better than the over-the-top padded entries. I hope you get some strange from time to time as she watches.